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When we arrived Telmen sum there wasn’t hospital my dad was born. So there was only ruin of that hospital and dad rolled over there. Some people were laughing at him. Then we moved to Uliastai , about 4.00pm we came there and dad’s friend named Guree invited us to his home for dinner. After 2 hours we stayed at the hotel and inserted clothes, some foods from car. It was full-moon night , 11th of July
near Telmen sum
next morning , around 5.00 am my dad’s friends Guree, Puujee and their families went to “ Dayan hairhan ” to see “OTGONTENGER” great mountain with us.
Its 70 kms way was so hard to go by car. We climbed to top of “ Dayan hairhan ” from lower slope of a mountain. We saw rare and special flower named “Vansemberuu”.
I had ever seen this flower before. It was very wonderful flower. After we went out on the top of this mountain we saw “OTGONTENGER” great mountain’s half part with cloudy and foggy sky. Thus we couldn’t see completely. My parents’ main aim was to see great mountain and they disappointed cause of cloudy and foggy sky.
near Telmen sum
next morning , around 5.00 am my dad’s friends Guree, Puujee and their families went to “ Dayan hairhan ” to see “OTGONTENGER” great mountain with us.
Its 70 kms way was so hard to go by car. We climbed to top of “ Dayan hairhan ” from lower slope of a mountain. We saw rare and special flower named “Vansemberuu”.
Soon we came down and ate meat dish prepared in its skin /boodog/ . After lunch we moved to see water station of Uliastai city which is one of the biggest water stations of our country. Many workers and heavy machines were repairing its storage lake when we arrived there. Before night we came to the hotel and watched Naadam events. My parents and dad’s friends planned for next day to go other mountain to see great mountain.
Next sunny morning we went to see “9 White Pyramids” ,were built for 9 Great Lamas of center halha.
Next sunny morning we went to see “9 White Pyramids” ,were built for 9 Great Lamas of center halha.
province’s famous people such as first and second president P.Ochirbat, N.bagabandi, well known writer B.Yavuuhulan and president of G.O.K Otgonbileg. There were many interesting thing about them For example, there was first love letter from president Bagabandi for his wife Oyunbileg. About 1.00pm we went to see great mountain again. When we arrived our planned place, great mountain was lighting with its all part and there was no cloud and no foggy in the sky. We were very happy to see great mountain. I took many photos and mum raised milk for hairhan. 
3 Comments:
Oh, wooow! Very very nice pics!!! Thank you so much! I really like Mongolian nature photos and the second one from bottom is the most beautiful. You can proud of this work if you took shots ;]
mmmm… when reading your posts, you look like foreign tourist who travelled around Mongolia and wrote this ;]
Nice writing!
Bye,
good post. keep posting!
Stunning pics! You are a really good photographer! the grammar is not so good, unfortunately. I'll try to analyze some of your most common mistakes: relative clauses / e.g. the 1st sentence- When we arrived to the sum, the hospital where my dad was born had already been destroyed/; prepositions- / after 2 hours - 2 hrs later/; articles /a rare flower/; wrong words- / inserted clothes?/half part with cloudy and foggy sky?.Pls check them out. Come and see me after classes. Don't be discouraged!
I look forward to new posts from you
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